There are 1,000,000 formatting things to do, but there are now 7 annotated essays up and a few extra things on blacks/priesthood. The annotated essays now up at https://ldsdiscussion.wixsite.com/mysite/ are:
Book of Mormon translation* at https://ldsdiscussion.wixsite.com/mysit ... ed-essay-3
Book of Mormon DNA issues* at https://ldsdiscussion.wixsite.com/mysit ... y-translat
Polygamy - Kirtland and Nauvoo* at https://ldsdiscussion.wixsite.com/mysit ... nded-essay
Polygamy - Utah Period at https://ldsdiscussion.wixsite.com/mysit ... y-kirtland
Book of Abraham* at https://ldsdiscussion.wixsite.com/mysit ... ed-essay-1
First Vision at https://ldsdiscussion.wixsite.com/mysit ... ed-essay-2
Blacks and Priesthood/Temple Ban at https://ldsdiscussion.wixsite.com/mysit ... -ban-essay
* = Hagoth's brilliant work integrated. The rest I did without, so that explains the dropoff in awesomeness.
I am going to next add sections on the priesthood restoration problems, the JST being lifted from Adam Clarke, and then start doing smaller ones on the more obvious issues like Deutero Isaiah, anachronisms, King James issues, changes to the D&C, and then probably just try to take on apologetic pieces in annotated way.
Anyway - if you read anything let me know what you think. I tried to make the tone more neutral from Hagoth's essays, but then as I got going I noticed I was getting more and more blunt as well, so I do want to try and fix that further.

The website is at https://ldsdiscussion.wixsite.com/mysite/ - you can use the top menu to navigate around. I will keep working on getting formatting done better as we go, but just wanted to get content up.
Let me know if there are corrections/suggestions on what to add/topics to cover next, etc. I realize this will not be some huge site, but if I can help a few people down the road it will be worth it... and I think it takes a slightly different approach than the CES Letter because it gives the apologetic argument before it explains why it doesn't work. Obviously they'd still disagree with my conclusions, but at least both sides are there for a reader to see.
Thanks y'all!