For your consideration: a new annotated essay
For your consideration: a new annotated essay
One of my little side projects is creating annotated versions of Gospel Topics essays. I insert notes and commentary directly into the essay, which I find to be a very effective way responding directly to the tap-dancing, half-truths and deflections. I have recently updated all of my efforts so far and added my real name and email, just in case anyone actually sees them and is interested in giving feedback or criticism (or extending an invitation to a court of love ).
My latest is the Book of Mormon Translation essay, which can be found here:
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1jv0pF ... MwXtLW3dkM
If you happen to find the time to read it, I would appreciate feedback on any errors you find or suggestions for improvement.
Here are my past efforts. Some of them actually have more commentary than essay, but that was necessary to fully respond to the "inoculation."
Book of Abraham: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1Logow ... 0qOhleGrdc
Nauvoo Polygamy: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1vd_nk ... e15eAF2Fxc
DNA and the BoM: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1tz7y ... IXJOfV_Mis
My latest is the Book of Mormon Translation essay, which can be found here:
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1jv0pF ... MwXtLW3dkM
If you happen to find the time to read it, I would appreciate feedback on any errors you find or suggestions for improvement.
Here are my past efforts. Some of them actually have more commentary than essay, but that was necessary to fully respond to the "inoculation."
Book of Abraham: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1Logow ... 0qOhleGrdc
Nauvoo Polygamy: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1vd_nk ... e15eAF2Fxc
DNA and the BoM: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1tz7y ... IXJOfV_Mis
“The easy confidence with which I know another man's religion is folly teaches me to suspect that my own is also.” -Mark Twain
Jesus: "The Kingdom of God is within you." The Buddha: "Be your own light."
Jesus: "The Kingdom of God is within you." The Buddha: "Be your own light."
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I'm only part of the way through the Book of Mormon translation essay, and the commentary is awesome.
Edit: When taking about Hebraisms, this paper about the ancient authorship of Green Eggs and Ham might be good to cite: https://www.dialoguejournal.com/wp-cont ... 04_173.pdf
Edit 2: Some months ago, I went looking for sources that described how the Urim and Thummim worked. The only description of them I could find that said that the lenses were clear came from JS's mother. Other sources described the lenses as opaque. I don't remember if it was said directly, but I remember my impression that JS used the U&T by putting his face in a hat while wearing them. This is supported by his need for a scribe for the 116 pages.
Edit: When taking about Hebraisms, this paper about the ancient authorship of Green Eggs and Ham might be good to cite: https://www.dialoguejournal.com/wp-cont ... 04_173.pdf
Edit 2: Some months ago, I went looking for sources that described how the Urim and Thummim worked. The only description of them I could find that said that the lenses were clear came from JS's mother. Other sources described the lenses as opaque. I don't remember if it was said directly, but I remember my impression that JS used the U&T by putting his face in a hat while wearing them. This is supported by his need for a scribe for the 116 pages.
Learn to doubt the stories you tell about yourselves and your adversaries.
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Thanks Reuben. Yeah, that Green Eggs and Ham article is great.
At some point I mention that Lucy Mack Smith described the stones as "three cornered diamonds set in glass," while Martin Harris said they were opaque white stones with grey lines running through them. When you compare the various descriptions it becomes clear that no one actually saw them, they were just describing what they thought they looked like, based on Joseph's description. Besides, like the gold plates, they came with a death sentence if you looked at them.
At some point I mention that Lucy Mack Smith described the stones as "three cornered diamonds set in glass," while Martin Harris said they were opaque white stones with grey lines running through them. When you compare the various descriptions it becomes clear that no one actually saw them, they were just describing what they thought they looked like, based on Joseph's description. Besides, like the gold plates, they came with a death sentence if you looked at them.
“The easy confidence with which I know another man's religion is folly teaches me to suspect that my own is also.” -Mark Twain
Jesus: "The Kingdom of God is within you." The Buddha: "Be your own light."
Jesus: "The Kingdom of God is within you." The Buddha: "Be your own light."
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Which is absolutely hilarious if you really think about it. What better way to prove the veracity of your prophetic claims than to kill off a couple of your enemies by "accidentally" letting them see the plates, or the magic prehistoric spectacles?
Faith does not give you the answers, it just stops you asking the questions. -Frater Ravus
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Gave up who I am for who you wanted me to be...
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Gave up who I am for who you wanted me to be...
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i really like these Hagoth. fantastic work.
~2bizE
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Nice work Hagoth!
I read through it pretty quickly, learned lots of things I never knew before! I only noticed one typo:
Cheers!
I read through it pretty quickly, learned lots of things I never knew before! I only noticed one typo:
An extra "s" before the.Joseph’s claims. We must assume that it continues to be an embarrassment that threaten s the...
Cheers!
“Sir,' I said to the universe, 'I exist.' 'That,' said the universe, 'creates no sense of obligation in me whatsoever.”
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YzmYP3PbfXE
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Thanks Rubin! Fixed it.RubinHighlander wrote: ↑Sat Mar 24, 2018 8:32 pm Nice work Hagoth!
I read through it pretty quickly, learned lots of things I never knew before! I only noticed one typo:An extra "s" before the.Joseph’s claims. We must assume that it continues to be an embarrassment that threaten s the...
Cheers!
“The easy confidence with which I know another man's religion is folly teaches me to suspect that my own is also.” -Mark Twain
Jesus: "The Kingdom of God is within you." The Buddha: "Be your own light."
Jesus: "The Kingdom of God is within you." The Buddha: "Be your own light."
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Yeah, like when Oral Roberts said God would kill him if his followers didn't come up with 8 million dollars by a certain day. It seemed like the greatest thing he could do for his cause would be to get struck down by God on that day for all the world to see. But nope, they came through with the cash. Score 1 for religious leaders demanding money, 0 for evidence of God.
“The easy confidence with which I know another man's religion is folly teaches me to suspect that my own is also.” -Mark Twain
Jesus: "The Kingdom of God is within you." The Buddha: "Be your own light."
Jesus: "The Kingdom of God is within you." The Buddha: "Be your own light."
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I like the tone. To me, you come across as tough, but not angry or accusatory. You're just responding in a no-nonsense way.
I wonder how this would come across to believers. Probably like you're accusing the believers themselves of murder.
I wonder how this would come across to believers. Probably like you're accusing the believers themselves of murder.
Learn to doubt the stories you tell about yourselves and your adversaries.
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I'm about half-way through as well. The quote from Lucy Smith is the first I've ever heard of it. That was a nice find.
One of the things that always troubled me is the way the church "cherry picks" information. I know, for example, that David Whitmer's treaties "To All Believers in Christ" is one of the primary sources the church used to describe the hat method (i've seen it used in other places when the church was forced to disclose). But that work from David ALSO refutes the entire priesthood restoration myth. So, the church will use one part they like, and then discount another from the same authenic source? Cherry Picking.
That might be interesting to include--this practice is yellow journalism IMHO. Just a thought. Your probably already have a reference like this.....
One of the things that always troubled me is the way the church "cherry picks" information. I know, for example, that David Whitmer's treaties "To All Believers in Christ" is one of the primary sources the church used to describe the hat method (i've seen it used in other places when the church was forced to disclose). But that work from David ALSO refutes the entire priesthood restoration myth. So, the church will use one part they like, and then discount another from the same authenic source? Cherry Picking.
That might be interesting to include--this practice is yellow journalism IMHO. Just a thought. Your probably already have a reference like this.....
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I've bookmarked these and plan to spend time with the them in the future. Reading through your BofM translation piece right now. You write very well and the tone is objective. Well done!
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Please let me know what you think about the tone of the others if you get around to them. I've had a little more distance since I wrote those.
“The easy confidence with which I know another man's religion is folly teaches me to suspect that my own is also.” -Mark Twain
Jesus: "The Kingdom of God is within you." The Buddha: "Be your own light."
Jesus: "The Kingdom of God is within you." The Buddha: "Be your own light."
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Hagoth, I am very impressed with your tenacity and energy level. First your archeological studies and now your essays. Thumbs up!
BTW, have you considered making these into some podcasts?
BTW, have you considered making these into some podcasts?
Good faith does not require evidence, but it also does not turn a blind eye to that evidence. Otherwise, it becomes misplaced faith.
-- Moksha
-- Moksha
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If I had the time, I'd use these comments to turn the original essays into honest ones.
Learn to doubt the stories you tell about yourselves and your adversaries.
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Hagoth, this is amazing! Thank you so much. Saved for future reference as my casual AM browsing will not allow me to really tackle this today.
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I agree that they could make good podcasts, but I don't know if I have the kind of personality to pull it off. Not really my shtick. I thought I might record a listener essay and submit it to IOT, just to see if I'm capable of that sort of thing.
“The easy confidence with which I know another man's religion is folly teaches me to suspect that my own is also.” -Mark Twain
Jesus: "The Kingdom of God is within you." The Buddha: "Be your own light."
Jesus: "The Kingdom of God is within you." The Buddha: "Be your own light."
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I wanted to make sure and Thank you too Hagoth! These are awesome, really well done!
Well, I'm better than dirt! Ah, well... most kinds of dirt; not that fancy store-bought dirt; that stuff is loaded with nutrients. I can't compete with that stuff. -Moe Sizlack
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Thanks! I am loving your commentary!
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I've read that acronym IOT (Internet of Things) before, but I thought it was a way to communicate with my toaster over the internet.
Good faith does not require evidence, but it also does not turn a blind eye to that evidence. Otherwise, it becomes misplaced faith.
-- Moksha
-- Moksha
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did you mean divine?Why did the brown seer stone fall out of favor and need to be replaced with something more devine?
http://www.dictionary.com/browse/divine